Monday 4 January 2010

What can you do in 50 words?


We had some fun with mini-sagas in school. Are you up for the challenge? ALL you have to do is write a complete story within the 50 word limit.

Listening to The Blue Nile - Let's Go Out Tonight (in fact the whole of "Hats" - that kind of a day - Hi, to Paul Buchanan and hugs and kisses to Joannie.)

IN HOT WATER

Cloud-like vapour billowed. Ronnie stumbled back into the corner, on adrenalin-clumsy feet. Sweat dripped from his brow. Steps beyond the door thudded louder than heartbeats.
What words could he say? He was responsible. All he could do was wait.
“Ronnie! Hot enough? That shower has a cold tap too!

4 comments:

  1. Must be fun- teaching children, playing games with them!Seeing them grow!

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  2. You haven't dropped by my blog since quite some time.
    Please do & leave a comment!

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  3. Brilliant name for the character in your story. ;)

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  4. A whole story in 50 words?!?

    Well, I guess that's better than 6. Hmm, I'll come back to this.

    ..........dhole

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