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As I'm only a weekend writer of Romance, Darrah is still having trouble with Sark Hale Tarla. In a time long past in our history, a Sarkisian ship is stranded on Earth. Assimilation is at an early stage but it has not proven to be an easy option for either people. Now, Hale has been assigned to Darrah and her arm of men. His role is to smooth over any diplomatic - or worse - problems that might arise in the Outlands, where the Sarkisians were allowed to settle, when they are sent to find the missing human heir to the Thorn Throne, Erishdren. Rogue Sarkisians are thought to have been behind the abduction.
“Why didn’t you tell Rylo what happened between us?” Hale asked from his position on boulder at the edge of the camp.
“You have no right to use his proper name,” Darrah snapped.
“He is your lover?”
He observed how Darrah’s back became stiff, registered the increase in her heart rate, and how her pupils dilated.
“He is Second of this arm – anything beyond that designation is none of your business.”
Hale calculated the possibility that Darrah might have had a deeper relationship with Rylo before he shook his head and relaxed his shoulders. “All truths that could be related to the disappearance of your future king are my business.”
DONALD MAASS WRITE TIP #99
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