tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post3277974690421903398..comments2024-03-11T22:54:06.514+00:00Comments on Wordsmithing: WARRIORS, ROMANCE, AND JEALOUSY PERFECT FOR 8 SENTENCE SUNDAYAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-7857026127024585012013-05-28T17:42:39.572+01:002013-05-28T17:42:39.572+01:00Hi Melisse
Hale is definitely distracted from the ...Hi Melisse<br />Hale is definitely distracted from the task he has been sent to undertake.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-3789660519138601872013-05-28T17:42:03.788+01:002013-05-28T17:42:03.788+01:00Hi Susan
Thank you. I'm having a lot of fun th...Hi Susan<br />Thank you. I'm having a lot of fun thinking about this relationship.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-48528228851460743182013-05-28T17:41:22.293+01:002013-05-28T17:41:22.293+01:00Hey Misha
Thank you. There is going to be plenty o...Hey Misha<br />Thank you. There is going to be plenty of friction ;) one way or the other.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-83050956840781778722013-05-28T17:40:39.399+01:002013-05-28T17:40:39.399+01:00Hi Mona
Thank you. There has been enough going on ...Hi Mona<br />Thank you. There has been enough going on to ensure there should be more following along later ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-91820130621327710812013-05-28T17:39:48.229+01:002013-05-28T17:39:48.229+01:00Hi Cindy
I think he means most of everything -- an...Hi Cindy<br />I think he means most of everything -- and a lot of the things relating to Darrah.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-31414730714794107242013-05-28T17:38:57.273+01:002013-05-28T17:38:57.273+01:00Hi Red
We have secrets wrapped up in mysteries all...Hi Red<br />We have secrets wrapped up in mysteries all topped off with conundrums ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-33299432699618951732013-05-28T17:37:12.345+01:002013-05-28T17:37:12.345+01:00Hi Carrie-Anne
Thank you. I hope it all read as un...Hi Carrie-Anne<br />Thank you. I hope it all read as understated by vitriolic on both sides.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-20690913348638482722013-05-28T17:36:31.552+01:002013-05-28T17:36:31.552+01:00Hi Susan
Thank you.
For Darrah, Hale is the keep...Hi Susan<br />Thank you. <br />For Darrah, Hale is the keeper of the past and the key to the future.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-27518813046218145392013-05-28T17:35:36.669+01:002013-05-28T17:35:36.669+01:00Hi Erin
Thank you, although I can't take all t...Hi Erin<br />Thank you, although I can't take all the credit for the idea that was all Donald Maass.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-18042230645532076242013-05-28T17:34:35.454+01:002013-05-28T17:34:35.454+01:00Hi Sarah
I think she's blooming furious; but, ...Hi Sarah<br />I think she's blooming furious; but, as the leader, she has learned to hold back her knee-jerk reactions ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-13189789803493430402013-05-28T17:32:52.670+01:002013-05-28T17:32:52.670+01:00Hi Kate
Thank you. I hope they are.Hi Kate<br />Thank you. I hope they are.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-85126141339731027622013-05-28T17:32:34.351+01:002013-05-28T17:32:34.351+01:00Hi stevie-carrol
Thank you. I like the fact that y...Hi stevie-carrol<br />Thank you. I like the fact that you could pick up on how they are both having their perceptions challenged.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-73416752978050420942013-05-28T17:31:39.954+01:002013-05-28T17:31:39.954+01:00Hi Elaine
I think you may be right *heheheHi Elaine<br />I think you may be right *heheheAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-32561722889786442862013-05-28T17:31:07.139+01:002013-05-28T17:31:07.139+01:00Hi Veronica
Darrah is supposed to be the one inves...Hi Veronica<br />Darrah is supposed to be the one investigating the disappearance Hale is overstepping - as usual ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-11269319721978030402013-05-28T17:30:15.319+01:002013-05-28T17:30:15.319+01:00Hi Linda
I wanted us to know that better than he d...Hi Linda<br />I wanted us to know that better than he does. I hope that came over in the piece.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-14598013508710332112013-05-27T23:11:55.855+01:002013-05-27T23:11:55.855+01:00Hale is certainly focused on her. Interesting!
L...Hale is certainly focused on her. Interesting! <br /><br />Love your blog content!Melisse Aireshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01478569639424075550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-84598003635729673992013-05-27T20:27:53.261+01:002013-05-27T20:27:53.261+01:00Good dialogue, a great snippet!Good dialogue, a great snippet!Susan Schilerhttp://teamfamilyonline.com/sacred-dance-of-life/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-62616311626925399112013-05-27T14:43:53.105+01:002013-05-27T14:43:53.105+01:00Ooh that is intriguing. :-D I also think something...Ooh that is intriguing. :-D I also think something's going on between Hale and Darrah. Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-18038585384829686392013-05-27T14:26:55.180+01:002013-05-27T14:26:55.180+01:00Nice snippet. I sense there is more going on betwe...Nice snippet. I sense there is more going on between Hale and Darrah or more to come.Mona Marzano Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06463102405493362153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-68589245767600481272013-05-27T04:44:34.411+01:002013-05-27T04:44:34.411+01:00I like the innuendo in the last line too. So does ...I like the innuendo in the last line too. So does he mean <i>everything</i> like even truths of a personal nature? Hummm... good snippet.<br /><br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">History Sleuth's Milk Carton Murders</a>HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-24384257444994604602013-05-27T01:44:47.038+01:002013-05-27T01:44:47.038+01:00I like "missing human heir to the Thorn Thron...I like "missing human heir to the Thorn Throne, Erishdren". A great mystery. The last statement, “All truths that could be related to the disappearance of your future king are my business.”, could have multiple meanings. What an intrigue!Red Wing citizenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09523025896051457839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-47426228512885105292013-05-27T01:14:13.385+01:002013-05-27T01:14:13.385+01:00I like the tension in their dialogue.I like the tension in their dialogue.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-80162050000285066732013-05-26T22:32:59.812+01:002013-05-26T22:32:59.812+01:00Very nice snippet and I really like Hale's las...Very nice snippet and I really like Hale's last statement--indicates interesting times may be ahead for Darrah.Susan Stuckeyhttp://susan-stuckey.storytellersinn.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-88592251351581840392013-05-26T22:04:17.139+01:002013-05-26T22:04:17.139+01:00Love the writing tip. Sometimes when I force mysel...Love the writing tip. Sometimes when I force myself to write forward, but aren't really feeling it, I realize I'm filling space between point A and point B. What changes here? What a great question to ask. Really helpful in giving direction.Erin Kane Spockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05376851676240606472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-41657771726049280772013-05-26T21:54:12.235+01:002013-05-26T21:54:12.235+01:00I'm not sure yet if Darrah's protesting to...I'm not sure yet if Darrah's protesting too much that she's not Ryo's lover, or ignoring too hard that something happened between Hale and her. . .<br /><br />Either way, excellent moment!Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.com