Sunday, 26 February 2012

6 SENTENCE SUNDAY - FION IS UP TO HER ANKLES IN SPACESHIP

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY THE MG WAY.

Part of the THE HIGH ROAD's re-write has been to heighten the tension and introduce a stronger element of adventure. 
Owing to a misunderstanding, Ethan's non-verbal communication has dropped Fion in a spot of trouble. 
She was confused when she was left behind with Tyrc and Tetta, Second and Third of the Second Tier. She keeps on the move, a slow and sticky walk, she doesn't have a lot of choice, she is a bit absorbed.
In this 6, Fion is up to her ankles in spaceship.

“We should celebrate the movement of the gift, for energy is the force that cannot be created nor destroyed.”
“Thanks be that the gift enthusiastically gives of the energy which is to be absorbed and renewed throughout the ship. Elastic and eternal is all energy!”
“Visible and invisible.”
Tyrc and Tetta were getting along famously, all of a sudden. I was struggling to avoid being... gifted.

ARE YOU SHARING SENTENCES FROM YOU WIP TODAY?

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