Showing posts with label Creating the perfect novel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Creating the perfect novel. Show all posts

Monday, 6 May 2013

Can YOUR MC communicate without words?


MAY IS HOSTED BY WRITING TIPS BY WRITERS, DONALD MAASS'  TWEETS ON CREATING THE PERFECT NOVEL ;)  & SECTIONS INSPIRED BY THESE:

“Write even when the world is chaotic. You don’t need a cigarette, silence, music, a comfortable chair, or inner peace to write. You just need ten minutes and a writing implement.”  ~ Cory Doctorow

DONALD MASS WRITE TIP 79

Pick a point when your MC is suffering or stuck.  Tape her mouth shut.  She has to act it out.  What does she do.

I squirm and turn my head. Shieldless, stripped of my gold cloak, I lie under the high sun. My cracked lips are melded and each movement hurts, unbearably. I shiver. Fever? My body shudders again. I still think Cold but I must be burning. I feel heavy. I want to turn: it will do until I can find the strength to crawl away. Too weak, I relax my head into the dust: an offering to the sun. How long would it take to crumble into dust? Too long. First, I roll my eyes and my head follows. If I focus on my arm, I can find the will to turn.

When could it be an advantage for your MC to not be able to speak? 

Saturday, 4 May 2013

Does YOUR MC show counter-emotional reactions?


MAY IS HOSTED BY WRITING RULES BY WRITERS, DONALD MAASS'  TWEETS ON CREATING THE PERFECT NOVEL ;)  & SECTIONS INSPIRED BY THESE:

“Stop in the middle of a sentence, leaving a rough edge for you to start from the next day — that way, you can write three or five words without being “creative” and before you know it, you’re writing.” ~ Cory Doctorow

DONALD MAASS WRITE TIP 78

Find a scene that’s all action. Drop in an emotion that your protagonist doesn’t expect to feel.

An archer threw himself from a rocky outcrop and stabbed at her neck with a short sword. She blocked him with her shield and stunned him with the wild magic she harnessed from the powerful surge of fear that flooded the clearing. Mendia shrugged the man’s dead weight away her as she turned. From the red glow in the distance it seemed Ardac was channelling envy. Didn’t the magician who wielded his own emotion suffer recurring bile? She grinned. Then, forcing her wayward spell wider to enhance her protection, she slashed on towards Galan and the heart of the conflict.

How do you think a counter-emotional reaction from your protagonist would improve a scene?