G is for GOALS |
Each
post for the A to Z Challenge is the challenge I set for myself.
Sometimes people's goals conflict ;) |
For me, in writing, G is for Goals because it is the difference between
theoretically writing and challenging yourself to produce sections or chapters
that build up to the end.
HAL LONGLEAT AND THE TROUBLE WITH TRUTH
Hal licked at the rough and torn skin
beside his nail. Then, he gripped his hands over the top of his hat. He edged away
from the shadow and risked moving little further forward. He climbed on to the
water trough and rested a hand on the stable wall for balance. He still wasn’t
tall enough to see over the crowd. It wasn’t that he cared about the result. He
had to know what was happening.
Could YOU have been gifted with the ability to identify
and eliminate weak and brittle phrases from your work? To the uninitiated,
these interlopers look like quality imagery.
CLICHÉ RAIDERS: REWRITE!
• give a
dog a bad name
• give up
the ghost
• glutton
for punishment
• goes
without saying, it
• goes
from strength to strength
• grasp
the nettle
• greatest
thing since sliced bread
• great
unwashed, the
• green
with envy
• grim
death, like
FOR G, I CHOSE GOALS WHAT IS
THE SUBJECT OF YOUR G POST?
your challenges to yourself are easily things i shoud work on too!
ReplyDeleteand i love the challenge of rewriting cliches. i need to print these out and try some!
Hi Tara
DeleteYou're more than welcome to join me on my quest to find the sharpest (impossible to ignore) kind of writing ;)
Vonnegut's advice that a protagonist should always have a goal, even if it's a glass of water, stands up. It's a sound place to start from.
ReplyDeleteHi John
DeleteAny kind of goal - for the writer or the mc - is essential :D
I set goals for quality over quantity. The challenge of rewriting cliches is a great one.
ReplyDeleteHi M Pax
DeleteThank you. Clichés are comfy like saggy end of the sofa - easy to slip into ;) You're right quality is important too. I worry because I often find that today's quality is tomorrow's clunky.
Goals are so important. I'm always creating goal lists.
ReplyDeleteA to Z Participant
Cherie Reich - Author and Surrounded by Books Reviews
Hi Cherie
DeleteI like the idea of having a Goal List - it will fit well with all the other lists I live with.
Having goals is the only way I get anything done. I'm a fan of them! The trick is not to have too many goals at once. Otherwise, you're going to get overwhelmed and get nothing done.
ReplyDeleteJulia King at http://juliawritingjewelsking.blogspot.com/
Hi Julia
DeleteThanks for stopping by and commenting. You have made a good and valid point, there's nothing worse than suffering under the weight of self-expectation.
New goal: avoid using "green with envy." Thanks!
ReplyDeleteKathy @ Swagger Writers
Hi Kathy
DeleteI'm loving your new goal ;)
Great job! Mine was also goals but totally lame. LOVED yours! I'll be back!
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia
DeleteI'm glad you liked my Goal's post. You are welcome to call back whenever you like ;)