There is a post missing. Strike me, that doesn't happen very often.
What happened to the regular posting schedule?
My eighteen year-old arrived back from Uni last Friday. From the look of her room, the landing and the spare room, she brought the whole of Manchester with her.
My Minnow is the sloth that lives on the top of whatever is lying around in her room. From a Health and Safety perspective, I didn't want to be handing out crampons to everyone who wanted to negotiate the landing.
I called a breakfast meeting at McDonalds - crafty ;) - once she decided it was her idea to life-launder, we spent the day discussing the relative merits of multiple pairs of black heals and capsule wardrobes.
We noticed the thunder and lightning and the torrential rain - it made the perfect backdrop to endless clothes handling, folding and hanging.
Hours later...
To celebrate the six bags of shoes and clothes that made it to the charity shop we went to Starbucks - sandwiching the miserable day with her two favourite things ;)
BUT...
When we arrived at Starbucks some customers were sitting cherishing their mugs of coffee and everything seemed normal but dim.
The cheery assistant informed us they had experienced a powercut... the storm--don't-ya-know.
So we waited. We couldn't leave, we'd taken orders from the family... we would wait.
We chatted.
We couldn't leave because the coffee wouldn't be long.
We couldn't leave because we'd waited too long for the coffee.
We left coffeeless.
I hadn't written the post--blast!
Wednesday, 29 June 2011
Monday, 27 June 2011
VIRTUALLY A LITERARY FESTIVAL
The posts are always informative and insightful on the Awfully Big Blog Adventure, for two days they are going to be awesome.
The ABBA Litfest is going to be hosted by a raft great authors. Liz Kessler, Lucy Coats, Andrew Strong and Celia Rees are some of the fantastic children's authors who will be posting.
They have a hectic schedule planned: new posts every half hour.
Vlogs and interviews will be featured during the virtual literary festival.
There will be GIVEAWAYS too. :D
Click here for more information.
The Twitter hashtag is #ABBAlitfest, follow to keep up with the content.
Friend the Facebook page too.
An open access literary festival on 9th and 10th of July? I know where I'm going to be.
Saturday, 25 June 2011
BASIC CONFLICTS COME IN 3 FORMS... OR 4
In a novel, conflict is an essential part of the plot.
There are three varieties of conflict you can inflict on your MC: inherent, external, and internal.
Inherent
Inherent conflict exists within the novel from the beginning - the environment, social mores within your society, previous experiences.
Inherent
Inherent conflict exists within the novel from the beginning - the environment, social mores within your society, previous experiences.
External
External conflict is the rub of one character upon the other - the antagonist. The external conflict can also be provided by environmental changes such as extreme weather.
Internal
Internal conflicts are driven by fear, doubt or failure and the MC's need to protect themself from physical, mental or emotional pain.
There is a fourth kind of conflict.
Extra-personal
I see this as the writer inviting the reader to bring their knowledge, understanding and fear into the plot eg when a character says it's time to go for one last swim, take the short-cut home or how kind it is to help the guy with the broken leg load his shopping into the car, I'm cringing and looking ahead to see if it is safe to read on. ;)
Without conflict, there is no novel.
I have no favourite kind of conflict but pitting an MC against nature leaves me cold ;)
Which kind of conflict do you love to read or write?
Thursday, 23 June 2011
WRITING FOR CHILDREN - CHILD'S PLAY
| The Independent's 5-minute Interview |
In 2008, Michael Rosen, the Children's Laureate, wrote advice about writing for children for The Guardian’s series entitled How To Write. In his extensive career, Michael Rosen has written 140 books of poetry and fiction for children.
This version is abridged ;)
We've all been children, we all know a parent or parent-figure. This makes us all potential writers of children's books.
I think of children's books as not so much for children, but as the filling that goes between the child world and the adult world. One way or another, all children's books have to negotiate that space, whether it's thinking about how the text of a picture book will sound when read aloud, or how the child views him or herself in a world run by adults.
And of course, more than likely, you're an adult reading this, so the moment you think about writing something for children, you'll be handling something or other from your own childhood. This may be something you read, experiences of being read to, pleasurable or painful experiences from when you were young.
There is also an interesting line between the child you once were and the children you know now. If you want to write a book for children, you will find yourself travelling to and fro along this line, wondering one moment about what kind of child you were, why you had those particular tastes and interests, what depressed or excited you, what you were afraid of, what you yearned for; the next, looking, listening and thinking about the children you know or meet.
Are there big differences, or is there some core child-ness that is unchanged?
Is the culture and background you came from, similar or different to the kinds of children you know and meet now? If so, how does your writing reach them?
The writer Morris Gleitzman told me that he sets himself one golden rule when he writes for children: "Start any scene as 'late' into the action or dialogue as you can."
We also have to spend time in bookshops, libraries, nurseries, schools and with reading children, seeing how the books work with the audiences.
You are of course the first audience for what you write, but you want to make yourself the kind of reader who can pretend to be the reading child. You also need to get that child who is now the age of your target audience into your head too.
A very important part of writing for children is appearing at book festivals, and in libraries and schools. An important part of becoming a writer for children is seeing what published writers do and say when they appear.
Writing children's books may be as lonely as any other kind of writing, but there is a big social element in how the books are taken to the readers. There are thousands of people out there doing this - parents, librarians and teachers mostly - so part of being a writer for children is being among these people at the events they organise. If you get the balance right, this will be part of what motivates you to go back into the cell and write some more!
Michael Rosen
September 2008
After 20 years of teaching, I have more trouble keeping the target audience out of my head. I learned what interested avid readers but try to write in a way that will engage those who were less keen.
I find the question Michael Rosen asked very interesting:
Are there big differences, or is there some core child-ness that is unchanged?
Developmentally or socially?
If you are not eight, how do you write for eight year-olds?
Wednesday, 22 June 2011
BUILDING FROM A STRONG PREMISE
MARTINA on the Children's Publishing Blog wrote a brilliant post about growing great ideas.
I have a strict 250 words only rule on my blog, so this is the condensed version of her advice. I transferred it in to my Notebook.
Starting with an elevator pitch and logline is easier than crafting a pitch for a completed, 80,000 word novel.
The premise itself can be honed until it is as strong, and as unique, as possible.
They say great literature contains:
- Layers
- Depth
- Great characters
- Beautiful writing
- Universal appeal
- Connection
The premise needs:
· At least one fascinating character
· An interesting setting
· An inherent conflict
· An emotional appeal
· A universal or familiar idea
· An original twist
· A piece of coolness – the envy quotient
· A high-impact inciting incident
· High stakes
· A pithy title
"Hook" doesn’t make it onto that list.
If the premise hits one or two of the following "it" factors, so much the better:
· A topical or current subject or event.
· A controversial, sensational, or heretical topic or subject.
· An alternate view or explanation for a known person, event or potential event.
· A mythological connection.
· A primal fear.
Simple ;)
and a lot harder to define.
WOW!
Write the elevator pitch first is the best piece of advice I have learned about making the writing process easier.
WHICH ONE PIECE OF ADVICE WOULD YOU TELL A NEW WRITER?
Tuesday, 21 June 2011
COMMA, RULES? ;)
Today is WT*$*AISTPT Comma Day ;)
This post is based on a piece of genius I have pinned up over my computer.
I'm letting Rowland, from from my wip - STARRING - demystify the slippery little tadpoles of punctuation.
COMMAS
Rowland drew a defensive ward.
One independent clause needs a full stop at the end.
Rowland drew a defensive ward when the forest was pierced by red eyes.
The independent clause is before the dependent clause.
(Punctuation only follows a dependent clause so the full stop is all that is needed.)
When the forest was pierced by red eyes, Rowland drew a defensive ward.
The dependent clause is now at the beginning of the sentence. As punctuation follows a dependent clause, the comma is needed.
Rowland drew a defensive ward; he repelled the danger.
These are two independent clauses; attach them with a semicolon.
or...
Rowland drew a defensive ward, and he repelled the danger.
There is an alternative form of punctuation, because you can join independent clauses together with a comma and a conjunction.
DO YOU FIND COMMAS SLITHER INTO YOUR WORK WHEN YOU ARE NOT LOOKING?
Monday, 20 June 2011
MORE POTTER? THAT WILL DO FOR ME ;)
| IT CAN'T COME SOON ENOUGH :) |
Living only ten minutes from the Leavesden Studios, I’ve been excitedly counting down to Spring 2012 since the Studio Tours announcement was made, in March. I can’t wait.
Now I’ve been tantalised by Pottermore.
My guess is that this isn’t a prequel or sequel to the series. I’m with those who believe it may be an interactive site – possibly linked to the studio tours.
I read – probably in The Guardian on-line – some one ask the question “Are the Potter books worth a second read?”
Do they really need to ask?
Sharing the books with my children, and at school, I have read every book aloud at least twice. Just for pleasure, I’ve read every book again, several times. I’ve made time to re-read them before every movie is released, in the UK.
When we were booking the flights for our holiday to America, we found the price was pounds cheaper if we travelled on Deathly Hollow Release Day. Is this significant? I think so.
I’ll only be fine if the cinema shows the movie at 8am. :( I’m looking for a London early release showing. If I can’t find one I may be found hunting around Times Square for a home-grown movie experience.
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