Thursday 12 January 2012

TEACHER SAYS 1

All of us, the part-time, gotta-fit-this-in-somewhere, students were gathering in the entrance hall; shiny, statement colours and new that was us and the building. 


Doing my version of waiting patiently, I sat twirling my college identity swipe card on the lanyard. 


I've checked the springiness of the fastening since so I don't understand how the card sprang off and shot across the vast, and near silent space. 


I was wearing black and white so I didn't mind, I find that red is a great accent colour. ;)


They had me registered for the other course on the other day.


My tutor asked me if I really wanted to be there. 


Despite my fantastic start and the fact that I've only been waiting since September I said yes quite quietly.




SIR SAYS:
  • Describe sensationally ;) using them all
  • In linear constructs, include staging posts to add the insight no one else would have thought of
  • Describe emotions - how she feels about the door is more important than what the door looks like.
HAVE YOU MANAGED TO EMBARRASS YOURSELF RECENTLY?

3 comments:

  1. Yes. I'm pretty sure someone heard me talking (loudly) to myself . . .

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  2. Hi GE
    It's sooo rude, people listening in when you were engrossed in talking things through with the person who helps you most. ;)

    Hi Julie
    oops! I try to only embarrass myself in front of people I know well.;)

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