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If you are writing about a character, if he's a powerful character, unless you give him vulnerability, I don't think he'll be as interesting to the reader. - Stan Lee
Six Sentence Sunday
I remembered to sign up for 6 Sentence Sunday *cheers and a very large grin
Now, I just have to work out how to get the post up quicker.
This Sunday I am posting from my romantic fiction.
DRAWN
Darrah has been charged with finding and rescuing the Regal's heir. The evidence suggests he was taken by a band of Sarkisians who feed directly from the living. Darrah fights her cultural prejudice and instinctive fears when The Sarkisian Council send Fauld Hale to work alongside her to rescue the boy and maintain the fragile peace between their peoples.
Like every other night, Hale took up a position on a rocky outcrop nearby. The ragged edge of flint was highlighted by the setting sun. Hale had pulled his legs up, his leather bag positioned underneath to absorb the worst of the sharp surface. Darrah had always assumed he rested apart because he distrusted them. Looking at the lush grass and the night flowers that grew in the glade, she wondered if she had misunderstood how he felt about his Sarkisian nature. Did he fear not being able to control the dele that could syphon the strength from any living thing near him?
DO YOU THINK VULNERABILITY IS A WEAKNESS?
in life it can be, but in writing, there is no life without it
ReplyDeleteI find vulnerable is a desirable quality when it is balanced with a few others ;)
ReplyDeleteNice sox sentences Elaine :-) id like to read more! Vulnerability can definitely be a weakness but also most certainly be a strength. Opening your self to someone or something can put them in a "vulnerable" place but also a potentially liberating and strong place. If that makes sense :-)
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DeleteHi Samantha
DeleteThank you.
I agree vulnerability is, potentially liberating... a desirable quality.
excellent description. I can definitely see his vulnerability in this.
ReplyDeleteHi Joanne
DeleteThanks. Hale keeps his distance. It didn't occur to Darrah to wonder why.
Great snippet! Love the Stan Lee quote. I agree that a vulnerable character are more interesting than one who's perfect.
ReplyDeleteHi Sondrae
DeleteWhat a lovely name! I loved the quote too it really made me think about Hale and how to make sure his actions expressed the more hidden side of his nature.
Great six sentences Elaine! I want to know more.
ReplyDeleteHi Summer
DeleteHope you enjoyed reaching the end of your studies. I'm glad you enjoyed the Six. :)