Wordsmithing: TAKING E B WHITE'S ADVICE - MORTIMER CHILTON AND THE COLLECTIVE

Thursday, 22 March 2012

TAKING E B WHITE'S ADVICE - MORTIMER CHILTON AND THE COLLECTIVE

B-MIRA-HEAD, Image from NASA

ALWAYS BE ON THE LOOKOUT FOR THE PRESENCE OF WONDER ~

E B WHITE

I spent much of my writing time today imagining my way through Mortimer's story. Following E B White's advice, I've been looking for the presence of wonder. Finding moments when, despite danger or loneliness, Mortimer would be in awe of something around him.

Wonder is the beginning of wisdom ~ Greek Proverb

Don't call it uncertainty -- call it wonder ~ Osho

IS THERE ANYTHING YOUR MC COULD BE IN AWE OF?

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Nighfala22 March 2012 at 13:43
Um, she could be in awe of Faldur. Snort!

Actually, there's a lot to be in awe of in my fantasy novel. Creatures she didn't know existed, as well as things inside herself equally unknown before. I love writing fantasy because of the "awe factor." I love stories about the outside world - sun, moon, stars, deep forests and barren mountains.

Thanks for showing those wonderful photos! I love the eternal majesty of space. I think it is truly a glimpse of God.
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Unknown22 March 2012 at 13:45
Hi Christine
I think his bravery and willingness to put duty before everything else is quite awesome.
Nothing puts humanity in perspective quite like the vastness of space.
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dolorah22 March 2012 at 23:22
One of my MC is in awe of the universe. He loves looking at the stars. Many think he is searching for God; but he's really just experiencing the world outside himself.

.......dhole
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Unknown23 March 2012 at 10:07
Hi Donna
The universe is awesome - no matter what you expect to find there.
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Susan Kane24 March 2012 at 17:47
Love the astronomy photos! My husband and I can be found star gazing on clear nights. Jupiter, Venus, and Mars were spectacular these last few weeks.

Oh, by the way, I mentioned you on my blog, giving you a Versatile Blogger award. People will be stopping by hopefully! Go over and
see what to do!
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Unknown25 March 2012 at 15:50
Hi Susan
The astronomy pictures are amazing - and there's a new one every day. Thank you for passing on a Versatile Blogger award. I'm happy to call by. :)
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RETURN: YA Paranormal Romance

I was running late. But, it was nothing I couldn’t make up with a bit of effort. I shook my head. Confident and happy? I smiled. Increasing my stride, I pushed until the muscles in my legs burned. I kept up the pace even when the hill grew steeper.

Magpie Lane was hardly wider than a ribbon that edged the woods but that didn’t stop traffic using it to get to the motorway quicker. Large trucks and fast cars loved Magpie Lane. They sent vibrations running through me rising from the soles of my trainers. I felt the disturbance in the ground, even before the air pressure tried to knock me off balance. I hunched my shoulders as the cab hauling a container spat stones up at me.

Jogging on the spot, at the entrance to woodland, I ached to leave the road and go inside. My Mum was probably still asleep but I could hear her you-never-know-what might-be-in-there lecture buzzing on repeat inside my head. I should run safe. Not even I would argue that running through the woods on my own was the best definition of safe but I wanted to run-wild and the woodland offered me that. This early, I should be safe from axe murderers or perverts in the trees and besides, I was fast.

I jogged down the slope into the trees. From two paces in, I felt different. Freer. It felt so right. Running in the woods did great things for my style. Avoiding the roots and dodging branches forced my stride longer, I had to step higher. The woodland, The Weald, was only a sliver of ancient woodland that the developers forgot to build on but it felt like it could have been anywhere. Everywhere. At any time. The oaks and beech trees dominated the space and the skinny, silver-birches squeezed up beside them. I laughed. For a second, the woods reminded me of school and I needed to run a lot faster.

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Thursday, 22 March 2012

TAKING E B WHITE'S ADVICE - MORTIMER CHILTON AND THE COLLECTIVE

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