Been working on the re-editing - go Beth!! 105,000 words and shrinking!
I think of the book - in this form - as the Haiku version of the first - edited and abridged etc
Have been writing poetry about relationships on Twitter - I-quote keeps dragging me (kicking and screaming) there, so here we go:
UN-KNOWN Knowing sounds certain- More self examination; psych-emeleon
HUMAN? Not really human: bitter, depressed and mourning - feels - somehow - other
RELATIONSHIPS RUST Neglect encrusts care; you tarnish the core of love, take it for granted
Sestina -six word poem
In-relationship's comfortable is dull in-sensitivity now.
EYES SEE OUT We live our lives, each thought, word, feeling and deed, so why are we self-blind?
(Nathan Bransford says...)
TIMELESS NOT TIMELY Eye to brain and heart, words digested are soul's food. Salves spirit - melds mood!