Keep the reader tense and the character away from their goal
SPOILER: There are two weaknesses in this novel - born too early, died too soon.
Dombey sat in the corner of the darkened room in the great arm-chair by the bedside, and Son lay tucked up warm in a little basket bedstead, carefully disposed on a low settee immediately in front of the fire and close to it, as if his constitution were analogous to that of a muffin, and it was essential to toast him brown while he was very new.
This is a warm and loving introduction of the father and son. It is also a reminder that not all care has the affect we hope for. It takes a couple of hundred words of dying wife and pride before the most significant character – the one we really associate with – is introduced:
--To speak of; none worth mentioning. There had been a girl some six years before, and the child, who had stolen into the chamber unobserved, was now crouching timidly, in a corner whence she could see her mother's face. But what was a girl to Dombey and Son!
The strength of Dickens' work comes from his ability to see and describe people: their surface selves and the insecurities layered under that. It is strengthened again by seams of universal themes: poverty and charity; greed and generosity; power and powerless, revenge and sacrifice. Dickens' characters can teach life's lessons to his readers, with a lot less pain.
Ahead of the Dickens 2012, it is great to see Oprah adding two Dickens' novels to her reading list: A Tale of Two Cities and Great Expectations.
Do you have a favourite Dickens’ novel? Are you planning to give one a chance?