tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post4260507373357441014..comments2024-03-11T22:54:06.514+00:00Comments on Wordsmithing: REVELATIONS AND THE GARDEN METAPHORAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-67134139863728334712012-05-19T16:27:08.705+01:002012-05-19T16:27:08.705+01:00Hi Sherri
I don't have a "but" / &qu...Hi Sherri<br />I don't have a "but" / "perhaps" epidemic I do find rashes of "when" opening sentences ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-5820531770503520962012-05-17T19:39:25.785+01:002012-05-17T19:39:25.785+01:00I don't think I have a favorite verb. I do thi...I don't think I have a favorite verb. I do think I overuse the words "but" and "perhaps" too much.Sherri Lackeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12574448009541412249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-83387020697195984892012-05-17T01:04:26.650+01:002012-05-17T01:04:26.650+01:00Thanks Lynn :)
Have fun lopping words out, as you...Thanks Lynn :)<br /><br />Have fun lopping words out, as you go.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-67688704408961827062012-05-17T00:29:02.587+01:002012-05-17T00:29:02.587+01:00i think that might just be an easier way to do it-...i think that might just be an easier way to do it--thanks!Lynn Proctorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349867270815243053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-85727598115393278582012-05-16T19:37:41.025+01:002012-05-16T19:37:41.025+01:00Hi Nut ;)
I know what you mean. A light edit here ...Hi Nut ;)<br />I know what you mean. A light edit here or there saves a build up of "weeds" and acts as a reminder when writing the next chapter. <br /><br />The trouble is, once I start I tend to go at it like a rose-bush-back attack :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-23095031881111476492012-05-16T18:05:52.798+01:002012-05-16T18:05:52.798+01:00I try to do a light edit of the previous chapter b...I try to do a light edit of the previous chapter before writing the next one. I find it helps.<br />Nutschell<br />www.thewritingnut.comnutschellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10967710710805174781noreply@blogger.com