tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post3732139174711249388..comments2024-03-11T22:54:06.514+00:00Comments on Wordsmithing: 5 NOTES ON ATMOSPHEREAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-15349078732821032202011-01-12T09:27:30.925+00:002011-01-12T09:27:30.925+00:00Hi Karen
Very true - minimalistic but atmospheric....Hi Karen<br />Very true - minimalistic but atmospheric. I guess that is where metaphors come into play. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-28348470185243036592011-01-12T09:26:50.018+00:002011-01-12T09:26:50.018+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-41600032320953104172011-01-12T04:37:23.402+00:002011-01-12T04:37:23.402+00:00Great advice on creating atmosphere! It needs to b...Great advice on creating atmosphere! It needs to be seamless, barely noticeable while having an impact, not easy to do.Karen Jones Gowenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01153821980625034810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-24059729037370963032011-01-11T22:52:03.124+00:002011-01-11T22:52:03.124+00:00Hi Madeline
Thanks for the follow.
Adding atmosph...Hi Madeline <br />Thanks for the follow.<br />Adding atmosphere is such an art form - as you are a poet you have a heads-up. You must be used to selecting words for their subtle nuances.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-39858415061142258952011-01-11T20:51:14.271+00:002011-01-11T20:51:14.271+00:00Great advice, I'm trying to do just that in my...Great advice, I'm trying to do just that in my latest short story. :O)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-7189691628519872092011-01-11T17:42:33.377+00:002011-01-11T17:42:33.377+00:00Hi Patti
I love your picture with the "soccer...Hi Patti<br />I love your picture with the "soccer" ball - it makes me smile every time I see it. :)<br /><br />Hi Faith<br />Thank you. I'm glad you found it useful. <br />I'm a big fan of editing. I have been ever since I discovered it existed ;)<br /><br />Hi Summer<br />Cheers :)<br /><br />Hi T.Anne<br />On of my re-reads is to check up on senses-representation ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-81994766118171666422011-01-11T17:23:00.081+00:002011-01-11T17:23:00.081+00:00This is a great post. I try to go back during edit...This is a great post. I try to go back during edits and make sure I hit at least most of the five senses.Tanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10518718614911804428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-75610936709239474272011-01-11T16:56:44.406+00:002011-01-11T16:56:44.406+00:00well put advice Elaine.well put advice Elaine.Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-35864354776956724712011-01-11T16:21:43.727+00:002011-01-11T16:21:43.727+00:00Great advice; very concise, and spot-on. Thanks!Great advice; very concise, and spot-on. Thanks!Faith E. Houghhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03823750019164801104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-90687701436651188092011-01-11T15:44:42.419+00:002011-01-11T15:44:42.419+00:00Great atmosphere tips, and I loved the song.Great atmosphere tips, and I loved the song.Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00685341739870191402noreply@blogger.com