tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post8892213627988996751..comments2024-03-11T22:54:06.514+00:00Comments on Wordsmithing: Still writing revisions of the Query letterAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-23755430262590088102010-01-25T01:46:36.505+00:002010-01-25T01:46:36.505+00:00Hey Emma
Thanks for that kind thought - have you c...Hey Emma<br />Thanks for that kind thought - have you consideered a career as a Literary Agent? <br /><br />There is an agency in London set up by a guy who got sick of trying to find an agent. His partner there is the real deal - I loved that idea - go him!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-48872969243943936172010-01-24T20:17:14.131+00:002010-01-24T20:17:14.131+00:00I would real it. Then again I am no agent.I would real it. Then again I am no agent.Emma Michaelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00472202702058908057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-82748034995539237732010-01-24T18:49:11.640+00:002010-01-24T18:49:11.640+00:00I'm on the case. :)I'm on the case. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-17551352089371820112010-01-24T18:18:56.092+00:002010-01-24T18:18:56.092+00:00The letter is improving, but I'd cut the parag...The letter is improving, but I'd cut the paragraph about yourself to one sentence "I'm a high school English teacher who also counsels troubled teens" or whatever. Simple and professional. You're selling your story, not yourself. That comes later.<br /><br />I don't think you need the "series potential" line. That can be discussed later, too.Anne R. Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02420000168356370825noreply@blogger.com