tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post6383040512203022365..comments2024-03-11T22:54:06.514+00:00Comments on Wordsmithing: LENGTH AND SIZE? WITH WRITING YOU NEED TO MIX IT UPAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-13013057351622079022011-01-04T01:52:58.757+00:002011-01-04T01:52:58.757+00:00Hi Jamara
It really stood out when I was experimen...Hi Jamara<br />It really stood out when I was experimenting with literary fiction: writing for The Boy. He needed long, rambling chains of thought. So different from the norm.<br /><br />Hi Chris<br />Keep up the good work. I don't go more than about three sentences before actively thinking about what I am writing and how.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-22467861741271260202011-01-03T23:14:22.010+00:002011-01-03T23:14:22.010+00:00I never really think about it. I guess that is pa...I never really think about it. I guess that is part of automatically doing it.Chris Phillipshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02638226375639228988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-82132154518140073672011-01-03T19:56:46.890+00:002011-01-03T19:56:46.890+00:00I know just what you mean. It's the first thin...I know just what you mean. It's the first thing I notices about someones work. Thank you for sharing it with us.Paula RChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05550276147711384895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-50753525306509573582011-01-03T16:26:20.555+00:002011-01-03T16:26:20.555+00:00Hi Stina
We don't usually try to keep mixing t...Hi Stina<br />We don't usually try to keep mixing things up for the reader ;)<br /><br />Hi Anne :)<br />Isn't it funny how some phrases will be forever shrouded in a smutty-kind-of mist ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-51255872158325312732011-01-03T13:54:06.592+00:002011-01-03T13:54:06.592+00:00When I saw the title of this post, Length and Size...When I saw the title of this post, Length and Size, I thought you were getting a little pervy on us Elaine. <br /><br />But now I see what you had in mind, yes, I agree. Mix it up. I hate reading long paragraphs with long sentences.Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-82857817249745698292011-01-03T13:11:32.694+00:002011-01-03T13:11:32.694+00:00I try to make sure my sentences and paragraphs are...I try to make sure my sentences and paragraphs are all mixed up. Hmmm. That sounds funny. But you know what I mean. ;)Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.com