tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post5049864028330387022..comments2024-03-11T22:54:06.514+00:00Comments on Wordsmithing: The 7 Commands of WritingAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-79781842497282845522010-12-04T20:50:40.859+00:002010-12-04T20:50:40.859+00:00Hi Jennifer
You don't need to worry about the ...Hi Jennifer<br />You don't need to worry about the -ly words . According to most sources you need a few to enable your characters to be fully rounded. :)<br /><br />Hi Clarissa<br />:)<br />The couldn't whittle the four Rs down to three - it portrays writing as an ongoing process. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-62220691110373858202010-12-04T14:27:25.103+00:002010-12-04T14:27:25.103+00:00These are super duper! I love the tips and try to ...These are super duper! I love the tips and try to use them when I write. Love the 3 Rs.<br />CDAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12160669603997465454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-53753540538461055892010-12-04T11:11:45.749+00:002010-12-04T11:11:45.749+00:00OOh this is great! I haven't quite mastered my...OOh this is great! I haven't quite mastered my ly words yet. :)Jennifer Shirkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16970585847385511795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-87533833235300538422010-12-03T20:10:45.351+00:002010-12-03T20:10:45.351+00:00Hi Dominic
Poor keyboard! Square bashing is one wa...Hi Dominic<br />Poor keyboard! Square bashing is one way to write :)<br /><br />Hi Anne<br />Poetical writing - I fight the need to write-clever. I feel for you both. Hopefully, she is amenable to change and growth.<br />It does look like a delectable read ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-61129137494944247372010-12-03T18:53:04.169+00:002010-12-03T18:53:04.169+00:00Great advice. Right now I especially like #6. I...Great advice. Right now I especially like #6. I'm dealing with a writer who thinks confusing the reader is a great way to create narrative tension. Arrgghh.<br /><br />And oooooh what a nice picture...Anne R. Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02420000168356370825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-71596708447339168632010-12-03T18:13:32.084+00:002010-12-03T18:13:32.084+00:00Great advice! (For when I'm done square bashin...Great advice! (For when I'm done square bashing!)Dominic de Mattoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05171145945316152596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-19157820464260706152010-12-03T17:31:57.296+00:002010-12-03T17:31:57.296+00:00Hi Stina
I don't know Taylor says she writes ...Hi Stina<br />I don't know Taylor says she writes a about her life: it's probably keeping Jake busy ;)<br /><br />Hi Anne<br />You know that's almost a fair trade. Colin's been around a lot at the moment - in the UK that is. :)<br /><br />Hi Summmer<br />Thanks for your kind words and suggestion. Writing with Military Precision was originally all one post. Bite sized made the message stronger and easier to digest ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-21962191848378821452010-12-03T15:17:03.050+00:002010-12-03T15:17:03.050+00:00These are all great points,
Going on the flow of t...These are all great points,<br />Going on the flow of this you could actually start writing a bit more in detail on each one if you wanted, like Passive voice, you can show and tell with examples, or even give helpful words to avoid when writing and why...lolSummer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-51103834786729773352010-12-03T14:45:47.346+00:002010-12-03T14:45:47.346+00:00I'll let you borrow my muse* for a week if you...I'll let you borrow my muse* for a week if you let me borrow Jake.<br /><br />(*Muse = Colin Farrell)Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-82042751496651345762010-12-03T14:11:40.694+00:002010-12-03T14:11:40.694+00:00Great post! Inspiring reading is definitely not wh...Great post! Inspiring reading is definitely not what Jake is doing right now. But alas, time to get the kids ready for school. No daydreaming allowed for now. ;)Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-34616874917549245482010-12-03T13:27:41.301+00:002010-12-03T13:27:41.301+00:00Hi Anne
I am deeelighted that the Commands are pos...Hi Anne<br />I am deeelighted that the Commands are posted over at yours ;)<br />There are many things in my possession I would happily lend you, but if Jake were one of them I think I'd need to be coerced to let him go. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-3524350637393487762010-12-03T12:59:46.111+00:002010-12-03T12:59:46.111+00:00Elaine this is fantastic! I'm copying it and ...Elaine this is fantastic! I'm copying it and hanging it by my computer. And hey, can I borrow Jake when you're done with him?Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.com