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Yep... that bow is definitely NOT where ...Hi Millie<br />Yep... that bow is definitely NOT where she left it ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-60975204567405141802013-08-19T11:36:31.688+01:002013-08-19T11:36:31.688+01:00Hi Summer
Thank you. I love 8 sentences, it gives ...Hi Summer<br />Thank you. I love 8 sentences, it gives just enough time to really set a scene.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-74816903963780598542013-08-19T06:38:39.243+01:002013-08-19T06:38:39.243+01:00That bow seems just a little too far away for comf...That bow seems just a little too far away for comfort...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-90663286309706060052013-08-19T01:08:54.618+01:002013-08-19T01:08:54.618+01:00Great descriptions- Thank you for sharing.
~Summer...Great descriptions- Thank you for sharing.<br />~SummerSummer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-31336405191059261282013-08-19T00:39:27.077+01:002013-08-19T00:39:27.077+01:00Hi Teresa
I'm glad you enjoyed the 8.
My holid...Hi Teresa<br />I'm glad you enjoyed the 8.<br />My holiday has been blisteringly hot and sunburn-y... thank you. Your porchville sounds a lot like my shady summer house ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-27043384914273474272013-08-19T00:37:46.233+01:002013-08-19T00:37:46.233+01:00Hi Misha
I'm glad you were able to spend the s...Hi Misha<br />I'm glad you were able to spend the summer watching the word count rise. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-28320944790201359792013-08-19T00:37:03.245+01:002013-08-19T00:37:03.245+01:00Hi Sarah
That's a good question. Things are a ...Hi Sarah<br />That's a good question. Things are a bit more sneaky than Snape-ish ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-83300620588189276522013-08-19T00:36:08.434+01:002013-08-19T00:36:08.434+01:00She went to sleep in camp surrounded by her men, t...She went to sleep in camp surrounded by her men, that's kind of what she expected to find when she woke up. I guess she must find putting Sarkisians in their place a bit too e wearing? ;) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-27525645475237030082013-08-19T00:33:24.955+01:002013-08-19T00:33:24.955+01:00Hi Veronica
Thank you. Whatever happens next I can...Hi Veronica<br />Thank you. Whatever happens next I can't think she's going to be finding it anything but vexing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-46260861921824541292013-08-19T00:32:11.962+01:002013-08-19T00:32:11.962+01:00Hi Susan
Thank you. I'm glad you went with Dar...Hi Susan<br />Thank you. I'm glad you went with Darrah's disorientation and felt the tension build with her. I was trying to make the familiar apparent but a little exotic too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-13098111524436069662013-08-19T00:29:58.555+01:002013-08-19T00:29:58.555+01:00Hi Karysa
Thank you. I'm glad you found the fi...Hi Karysa<br />Thank you. I'm glad you found the first of the 21st century novel tips from Donald Maass useful. But...Wow! I hope you can find the cash to hear him speak. If you do, I hope even more that you post all that you learn. The trip is a bit too transatlantic for me ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-53859033251928075862013-08-18T22:45:36.813+01:002013-08-18T22:45:36.813+01:00Welcome back! Hope the holiday was good :-)
This ...Welcome back! Hope the holiday was good :-)<br /><br />This scene is so full of description, and the tension builds subtly. I do wonder where the other people are. :-)<br /><br />Thanks for the writing tip. July and August were porchville days for me, after my 40+ outside of the home. It's all good. I'm fond of porchville. Thanks for asking!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-16159041275935007392013-08-18T20:53:04.852+01:002013-08-18T20:53:04.852+01:00Mainly, I'm just working on my new WiP. Other ...Mainly, I'm just working on my new WiP. Other than that, nothing really exciting. :-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-61594405828702005972013-08-18T20:23:39.374+01:002013-08-18T20:23:39.374+01:00Is there magic in this world? Or is something els...Is there magic in this world? Or is something else going on?<br /><br />Either way, fascinating snippet!Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-78296581494227363522013-08-18T20:08:53.842+01:002013-08-18T20:08:53.842+01:00I'm not sure how she got here, but I hope she ...I'm not sure how she got here, but I hope she figures it out soon.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-83532583614751592142013-08-18T19:55:13.172+01:002013-08-18T19:55:13.172+01:00Interesting scene, loved the way she assessed her ...Interesting scene, loved the way she assessed her surroundings and the puzzling-to-her results. Can't wait to see what happens next! Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-25426731425254193022013-08-18T18:20:11.432+01:002013-08-18T18:20:11.432+01:00So much tension, and a great way to describe the c...So much tension, and a great way to describe the creatures who inhabit that region. I also loved the writing tip - very cool :)Susan Schilerhttp://teamfamilyonline.com/moonlight-escape-part-9/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-25904804208901664022013-08-18T18:15:45.177+01:002013-08-18T18:15:45.177+01:00Fabulous descriptions! I also love the tip from Do...Fabulous descriptions! I also love the tip from Donald Maas. He's going to be doing a workshop in my area for members of our two local RWA chapters. Might just be worth the price... :-)Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-24616820515010007572013-08-18T16:54:31.226+01:002013-08-18T16:54:31.226+01:00Hi Lauren
Thank you.
Darrah is totally thrown beca...Hi Lauren<br />Thank you.<br />Darrah is totally thrown because her men are not where they ought to be at dawn. I wonder if Hale is responsible? ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-64241957567715606622013-08-18T16:53:14.329+01:002013-08-18T16:53:14.329+01:00Hi Sue
You are more than welcome :D
I'm glad y...Hi Sue<br />You are more than welcome :D<br />I'm glad you liked the excerpt.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.com