tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post316678785511635799..comments2024-03-11T22:54:06.514+00:00Comments on Wordsmithing: DREAMFEST? COUNT ME INAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-68347032303765548212010-06-06T23:39:56.708+01:002010-06-06T23:39:56.708+01:00Short and sweet. To the point while leaving questi...Short and sweet. To the point while leaving questions behind. Have no idea what's going on or the character but there's bound to be something interesting from this dream.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-70589608270834663042010-06-06T19:27:00.649+01:002010-06-06T19:27:00.649+01:00intriguing, disturbing ... everything that makes m...intriguing, disturbing ... everything that makes me want to turn the page. well done.Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10014195715998913268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-16180324384369677672010-06-06T19:02:06.200+01:002010-06-06T19:02:06.200+01:00Hi Andrew, Amalia and Hayley
It was a subconscious...Hi Andrew, Amalia and Hayley<br />It was a subconscious ripple for Jess and, I hope, made more people than her question what it could all mean ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-6481054341466060642010-06-06T15:37:12.105+01:002010-06-06T15:37:12.105+01:00It was creepy and enthralling at the same time and...It was creepy and enthralling at the same time and I normally don't do creepy but I want to read more. Thanks for sharing.Hayley Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-16503736469246126532010-06-06T06:43:05.245+01:002010-06-06T06:43:05.245+01:00This is short and chilling! I love that the humans...This is short and chilling! I love that the humans were the most monstrous. I really like that you kept it brief--it made it that much more powerful an image. Thanks for participating!!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-38374051732610703142010-06-06T02:08:41.136+01:002010-06-06T02:08:41.136+01:00Well that dog had it coming.
Nice teaser!Well that dog had it coming.<br />Nice teaser!Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-55643562563679665752010-06-05T09:19:58.933+01:002010-06-05T09:19:58.933+01:00Hi Elizabeth and Sarahjayne
Thanks for your kind t...Hi Elizabeth and Sarahjayne<br />Thanks for your kind thoughts and comments.<br />Brief dreams, shocking in their intensity, haunt Jess. I think, in dreams, unless some outside force is interfering, everyone is at the mercy of their subconscious.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-26306011489686699982010-06-05T03:49:23.467+01:002010-06-05T03:49:23.467+01:00Interesting scene. I wish it was longer. I'd l...Interesting scene. I wish it was longer. I'd like to read more of this.sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-21406357079274393722010-06-05T02:45:32.178+01:002010-06-05T02:45:32.178+01:00Oooh, what a teaser you are. I really liked this. ...Oooh, what a teaser you are. I really liked this. I want to read more. Why is the person all bloody?Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-7805397634369868822010-06-05T01:16:06.765+01:002010-06-05T01:16:06.765+01:00Hi Charity
Thank you - the dreams make Jess ask th...Hi Charity<br />Thank you - the dreams make Jess ask the questions too.<br />Al and Eric <br />Brutal and creepy in something so short? Yeah! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-49763684764411933362010-06-05T00:50:22.885+01:002010-06-05T00:50:22.885+01:00Brutal. I like how the humans were the least human...Brutal. I like how the humans were the least human-like creatures in your scene. Human beasts.<br /><br /> - EricEric W. Tranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13842968931062056407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-56008081176089970212010-06-05T00:48:39.784+01:002010-06-05T00:48:39.784+01:00Creepy, but it drew me in. Thanks for sharing.Creepy, but it drew me in. Thanks for sharing.Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625543235578144620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-27819556240033657422010-06-04T21:53:06.555+01:002010-06-04T21:53:06.555+01:00Ooo, nice. I wish there was more. What an interest...Ooo, nice. I wish there was more. What an interesting picture you paint, with the animals on the outside watching as the humans act like animals. Why are they stoning a dog? So many questions. I love when snippets have me asking questions.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-7992586098006200722010-06-04T20:32:58.264+01:002010-06-04T20:32:58.264+01:00Hi Larry - I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm go...Hi Larry - I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm going all economical!<br /><br />Hi Kelsey and Leigh<br />Thank you for your enthusiastic response. *blushes!<br />I loved the idea you were writing together. My daughter, the most picky Beta a person could ever find, says she'd be happy with co-author status too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-34473789207958736112010-06-04T20:22:46.934+01:002010-06-04T20:22:46.934+01:00Wow. Not only am I intrigued, I MUST know what thi...Wow. Not only am I intrigued, I MUST know what this was about. Like now. <br /><br /><3 Kelsey LeighKris n' Kelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15273239971556065096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-15874280909444585142010-06-04T18:58:13.195+01:002010-06-04T18:58:13.195+01:00Intense! Great snippet!!Intense! Great snippet!!DL Hammonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02007260062331783715noreply@blogger.com