tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post1950146064796223570..comments2024-03-11T22:54:06.514+00:00Comments on Wordsmithing: MORTIMER IS AT THE TRIGGER MOMENT - Six Sentences for SundayAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-41855980158327623642011-10-03T20:29:28.684+01:002011-10-03T20:29:28.684+01:00Hey, I commented... weirdness going on with blogge...Hey, I commented... weirdness going on with blogger.Danettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043881305977386629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-12359969375018310642011-10-03T09:21:04.386+01:002011-10-03T09:21:04.386+01:00Hi Anne
Thank you :D
It is a great way to simplify...Hi Anne<br />Thank you :D<br />It is a great way to simplify the story structure; I love it.<br />Poor Mortimer and Fortinbras - both free but separated by some unknown (to them) danger ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-24127118883506442522011-10-02T22:30:08.621+01:002011-10-02T22:30:08.621+01:00Congrats on the 300 followers! Like the 8 points--...Congrats on the 300 followers! Like the 8 points--nice simple way of looking at story structure. You sure have your protag in a lot of conflict there. LOVE the name Fortinbras! Looks like an exciting story.Anne R. Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02420000168356370825noreply@blogger.com