tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post1441083508216951070..comments2024-03-11T22:54:06.514+00:00Comments on Wordsmithing: WWW 8 SENTENCES The nasty truth that nobody wants to hear.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-5936560007384176792013-06-05T07:14:47.386+01:002013-06-05T07:14:47.386+01:00I wonder if he only desire her or if he is really ...I wonder if he only desire her or if he is really in love. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-33050765825591668232013-06-04T15:43:27.919+01:002013-06-04T15:43:27.919+01:00Hi Lauren
Thank you.
Poor Hale, teetering on a pai...Hi Lauren<br />Thank you.<br />Poor Hale, teetering on a painful high.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-44693565036858228982013-06-04T15:42:28.507+01:002013-06-04T15:42:28.507+01:00Hi rlee
Thank you for your kind words.
I was visit...Hi rlee<br />Thank you for your kind words.<br />I was visiting Mum this weekend - I feel bad about taking time to blog while I'm there. I'm visiting blogs today. I can't wait.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-19343915075588291652013-06-04T15:41:03.765+01:002013-06-04T15:41:03.765+01:00Hi Veronica
Thank you. I'll be grinning obver ...Hi Veronica<br />Thank you. I'll be grinning obver "SO vividly" for a long time.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-6543302230927479562013-06-04T04:00:40.455+01:002013-06-04T04:00:40.455+01:00Humm.. Does he have feelings for her or just a tak...Humm.. Does he have feelings for her or just a taker? I'm not sure yet....which is good! Nice snippet.<br /><br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">History Sleuth's Milk Carton Murders</a><br />HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-46661245599594220842013-06-03T02:44:01.852+01:002013-06-03T02:44:01.852+01:00Very beautiful eight! The scene really comes aliv...Very beautiful eight! The scene really comes alive.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-39435987158460666312013-06-03T00:10:33.514+01:002013-06-03T00:10:33.514+01:00Great 8. Very emotional.Great 8. Very emotional.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-14459968403881359852013-06-02T23:09:01.215+01:002013-06-02T23:09:01.215+01:00Excellent snippet! I love how vibrantly you paint ...Excellent snippet! I love how vibrantly you paint the scene and make it so tangible!Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07986129906420811246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-13259725293162066412013-06-02T20:45:26.844+01:002013-06-02T20:45:26.844+01:00I love it! Great premise, terrific chemistry and t...I love it! Great premise, terrific chemistry and tension, and wonderfully evocative "alien" feel! Can't wait to read more! Also, I really liked the writing tip there at the bottom...made me stop and think about my own WIP.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7673700697394236559.post-67103839897296543032013-06-02T19:22:54.680+01:002013-06-02T19:22:54.680+01:00Oh my, you really described the attraction her lif...Oh my, you really described the attraction her life force has for him SO vividly! Terrific snippet, can't wait to see what he decides.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.com